tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4987669466575978239.post1306378620086239755..comments2011-06-12T17:41:15.383-07:00Comments on Visit Ashley: TouchAshley Mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07282467992442778557noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4987669466575978239.post-88008706891054574362009-05-24T00:27:31.006-07:002009-05-24T00:27:31.006-07:00Good post. One thing I would say is that when you...Good post. One thing I would say is that when you're dealing with a sense like touch or feel, that you have to almost give that sense lifelike qualities. So when mentioning the Cheshire Cheese, you can use the "feel" of it to describe the aura the pub gives off. Does it feel dank and dark, comfortable, inviting? These words will give our readers clues to what the pub actually is like for you (or them) when visiting. The descriptive bits are very good, just remember that you want to give people more than just the description. You'd like to (in a perfect world) give them the feeling that they are right there with you, taking it all in, including your point of view and perspective on the place. <br /><br />Keep it up, and keep having fun!Ryan Parkhursthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16386771139507421900noreply@blogger.com