tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4987669466575978239.post5430021139757714683..comments2011-06-12T17:41:15.383-07:00Comments on Visit Ashley: The Shape of LondonAshley Mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07282467992442778557noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4987669466575978239.post-65741264511488353092009-05-24T00:30:15.438-07:002009-05-24T00:30:15.438-07:00Probably your best story yet, because you injected...Probably your best story yet, because you injected some of your personality into it. Really solid job. I would suggest doing a little bit of research on something like the hats of the guards. Maybe some factual information on why they wear them would fit in nicely to the story. <br /><br />Great job with this story though -- you're moving in the right direction.Ryan Parkhursthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16386771139507421900noreply@blogger.com